20 January 2024
Posted by By Robyn O'Mahoney
Titles, blurbs and openings
On Saturday 13 th January the Junior and Young Writers gathered at MAST Mayflower
Studios for the first writing workshops of 2024.
The sessions began with an introduction from successful children’s author, Ali Sparkes, who
is leading the groups this term. The groups were excited at the prospect of being guided by a
novelist with many titles under her belt, and we were all keen to put our pens to the page for
session one.
Once we were reacquainted, we discussed the journey we go on when we choose books in
libraries and bookstores. We talked about the importance of an intriguing cover, a strong
title, and a well-written blurb. And we considered the opening page of a story, how it needs
to hook us before we decide to dive in.
To demonstrate what we had discussed, Ali presented four of her books and asked the
groups to vote for the one they found most interesting, based on different aspects. The
decisions of the group changed as we started with just a title, then a blurb, then a piece of
the narrative, and we saw how our perceptions and interests went in different directions the
more informed we became.
Both groups then split into pairs to come up with their own ideas for a novel. They had to
decide on a title, write a blurb, and begin chapter one, before sharing their creations with
their peers. We heard some wonderful ideas, including 9,000 Years in Space, Detective Dog,
The Road from Home and Space Guinea Pigs and the Curly Kale of Death.
Both groups were brave and confident when they shared their story ideas, which were fully
formed and unique. Every pitch received a great response, and Ali gave
comprehensive feedback to encourage the writers to continue with their ideas and writing.
Next week Mayflower Junior and Young Writers will be joined by assistant, Carla Hall.
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Young Writers - Week 10 (The Art of Writing) – Final Week Showcase
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Creative Writing: Fun Facts, Diverse Voices and Different Perspectives
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